2009-09-11

When I was chasing peafowls



When I was chasing peafowls
on the beach in Singapore
with my children
the waves washed our feet suddenly.
we jumped up and down

2 comments:

Tim said...

Hello Kyoka!

I didn't know you had this blog, until I saw you following mine. How exciting!

This is a beautiful poem. Very clear and direct--the effect of immediate. I was there with you and your children right away.

Kyoka Nakazawa (中澤京華) said...

Hi Tim!

Thank you for your hearty comment.My children and I had a happy time.It's been good in our hearts.